Our Planet Poem by Helen Crutchett

Our Planet

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The ink black sky slumbering
Like some huge beast in hibernation
Slowly shakes off its sleep
Stirs, then quickens to life
Like a baby in its mother's womb
The steady rhythmic miracle unfolds
The final birth pang delivering
A premature sun ~

The dark curtain slowly draws back
Like a veil from a bride's face
Revealing her exquisite beauty
The sun starts her fiery dance
Beating like some giant heart
Giving life to our Earth ~

Suckling mother sun
Drawing endlessly the milk of plenty
We warm our beings over
The hearth of Ra bathed in the
Bold radiance of infinite fullness ~

The mantle of darkness soon surrounds
Descending to the waiting horizon
Our sun pays homage to her favourite Planet
Gives a final wave and disappears ~

Helen Crutchett

Sunday, July 7, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: planet,earth,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alyx Thru Edge 07 July 2024

This is a wonderful hommage to the life sustaining, (en-) lightening rays of the sun. Artistic use of metaphor and personification contributes to the message. Thank you!

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