Our World Poem by fareha fatima

Our World

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We want to go and we want to know,
What we've got we want to show,
And life is something we want to explore,
Our are dreams are something we've always wished of,
And in our live's we see blooming flowers,
But don't yet forget that life changes its colours,
And life is also full of melody,
But life also consists of tragedy,
The world keeps on saying there's no place for dreamers,
And its a harsh way they try to treat us,
Life is a roller coaster full of fun,
There are plenty of things need to be done,
People say life is a race and we need to run,
But we shouldn't always think about the world,
Think about our dreams cause they are our world,
And in the last when we come to an end,
We come to know that our dreams are our trend,
And in the race which we were to run,
At last we come to know that we've already WON!

Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am just a fourteen year old girl and I am also a dreamer.I wrote this poem because there are so many people who dream to be someone like singers, actors, dancers.. but they just don't get a chance in their lives so that they can show the world what they can do.And sometimes even their own parents fail to understand them and don't support them.So this poem is for those who dream.Don't leave your dreams fight for your dreams and one day you shall achieve.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 November 2014

And in the last when we come to an end, We come to know that our dreams are our trend, And in the race which we were to run, At last we come to know that we've already WON An excellent poem on dreams with a wonderful conclusion.Well done my child you have written a wonderful poem in this tiny age.

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