Overbearing Love Poem by Trevor Schulte

Overbearing Love



Love trembles in my heart
as I breakdown, wanting a return
that'll piece my heart into one.
Building a passion that burns
purely on zeal.
Take me and make me into a man
that doesn't rely on his wants
but holds to what he needs.
Separate these countless words in my mind
to form the perfect story of love.
Rearrange the letters over and over
till they appeal to my Need's heart.
Let the words flow forth,
down the stream of joyful tears
that flood my heart
to the brink of rationality.
On and on
my soul beckons for completion
as my mind conforms to content.
Break free oh love!
Give me a passionate flow
into a world that I cannot fathom.
I beg this unity develops
her world into mine,
yet I tend to forget, that perfecting love
sometimes takes time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Free 2bemeuc 14 July 2007

WOW! That was just beautiful. And then I look at your age and thought this was written by a much older wiser man. It's so deep. Your choice of words give so many vivid pictures. awesome write :) free

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