Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Pbdrawing My Lonely Drive/B/P Comments

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I'll draw (in color)
a picture of myself
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Oscar Velazquez
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 February 2009

I thoroughly enjoyed this tale. I didn't expect to, but the writer made it interesting. This shows what a good writer can do. I'm not sure about the structure. I would like to have seen a more conventional prose structure, but I can forgive that. Wonderful! GW62

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Oscar Velazquez

Oscar Velazquez

Anaheim, CA (Orange County)
Oscar Velazquez
Oscar Velazquez
Anaheim, CA (Orange County)
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