.............Pachelbel, Canon In D Minor Poem by elysabeth faslund

.............Pachelbel, Canon In D Minor



What then, is heard today? Water and sand
Miraging each other in Timelessness.
Smooth, rippling, tentative crescendos' part,
As I, holding Pachelbel to my heart,

Will never be. Solacing the cold air,
With violins, harp, cymbals, of morning.
What then, this sunrise of beggaring clouds
Seeking, searching chordless choirs of gods

In mere skies, while Canon in D Minor
Joys rags to kings' raiments, tantalizing,
Challenging Heaven for tones lovelier
Than I, the pauper, can bear in Winter.

Classically, my Spring will always be
These soft tones, that resurrected me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 23 December 2008

Interesting. A 'kind-of' sonnet, with rhymes only in lines 3/4,7/8,11/12,13/14. So why not try to rhyme the others? Perhaps an over-use of nouns as verbs - miraging, solacing, beggaring, joys - and a stretching of vocabulary and syntax that taxes me, for one (if you'll pardon the pun) .

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
586 / 402
elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
Close
Error Success