Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Pagkamoot Ki Seminarista Comments

Rating: 4.8

Kang ako malaog palang sa seminaryo
Ako nagduwa-duwa sa inot
Ta ang tentasyon wala-too
Alagad ang pagtubod dayupot
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Ency Bearis 10 November 2009

I regret that only today I read this beautiful vernacular poem, a well expressed introspection taken from the poet's heart. The only thing I noted are that Proper Nouns should be in Capital letters eg; Pebrero, Legazpi, Ina and Hunyo. Otherwise I can recommend this to all Bicolanos. I can rate this as 10 except the only words that I noted that to be in that proper write. If this started with small letters like the works of eecummings that is okay.

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Legazpi City, Albay, Philippines
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