sergio bruno

Pain

when the sun rises and night withdraws
Cold and in awful pain she lies
with her beautiful, invisible wings
not noticing that the bird
of nothingness
is there
she seemingly sits
with her eyes closed
but no
she is only a part of light now,
of light and love.........

Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    liked your imagination.giving the word flights a new meaning

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  • Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 2:14:00 PM)

    Intelligently written
    well done

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  • Keith Chapman (9/23/2009 5:40:00 AM)

    well written poem...............9

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (9/2/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    nice poem, thank you for sharing................10

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  • Peter Percy (8/22/2009 2:58:00 PM)

    very touching poem...........

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