Sunday, April 6, 2008

Pain Comments

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The pain within,
so hard to swallow,
im all choked up'
so deep and hollow.
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ally lira
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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

i really love it, the best description of pain ive ever heard.

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Meranda Tidwell 13 May 2008

I LIKE THIS POEM IT IS VERY GOOD

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Meranda Tidwell 13 May 2008

I LIKE THIS POEM IT IS VERY GOOD

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hello ally. you poem show more of your feelings and more of your life. Your poem is also related to my life as well be a bit more cruld. keep it up girl and may be you might be a famouse poetryst.

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