Pain... running through me,
as if leaves covered with dew.
The thought of feeling that cannot be seen,
suppressed; not knowing what it will do;
what it will do, to me and you.
Depression... covering my soul,
like an octopus strangling its' prey.
No worries, the bell will soon toll,
taking me away from this pleasantly disturbed day;
taking me far away, far away, far away I say!
Darkness... filling my heart,
as if 1,000 needles inject their poison repeatedly.
Rolling away on a steel cart,
thy life ending suddenly;
ending up, so sudden, that sudden could not catch up.
Pain... flows through us,
it courses through all.
With pain, thou cannot fuss,
for it will stay, patiently, everall.
Forever and ever; coursing through us all.
I love the way you use figurative language and the way you use words. Keep writing, please. Because this was simply amazing.
REAL PAIN, amazing poem! ! >..the descriptions are really awesome...loved it a lot...wonderful expressions....gr8 imagery...has all the essense of a poem...keep going..GOOD LUCK! ! ! >. read ma poems nd comment on them wen ur free..bye..take care.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love this poem so much keep in it