Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Pain-Killer Comments

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Are u worried of incidents in your past,
Has it disrupted your life like a bomb-blast.
Did your visions turned indistinct and foggy,
Are voices from your heart become unclear and noisy.
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Rikki Das
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Joshua Fegley 08 January 2013

Dude. Cool poem. But it would be cooler if you divided it up into sections, dropped the chat speak and checked your spelling. Peace.

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