Monday, November 30, 2015

Pain Still Comments

Rating: 4.3

Seeing the damage we can cause
we try to get away
we try to unfeel what is between
but we're victims of our own weaknesses
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Gabriel Owino Jr.
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Kate Lechoe 14 December 2015

Nice poem...'we run back and damage more'... We always try to retract.

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2015

An insightful piece of poetry, well encapsulated and nicely penned with conviction. Indeed, the potential for good and bad(evil) are continued in us, it's a primal instinct and we are all born that way. A lovely poem bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Gabriel. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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