Pain You Won't Understand Poem by The Raven

Pain You Won't Understand

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In the shadows of withered hopes,
where whispers coil like smoke in corners,
thoughts twist like vines, both sharp and sweet,
their thorns hidden, but ever lingers.

You stand outside, a watchful tree,
your roots in soil of unspoken fears,
while I'm a storm in a teacup,
turbulence brewing, hidden tears.

What seems like calm is a cracked mirror,
reflecting suns that barely rise,
where light plays tricks, and echoes dance,
and pain wears a guise of sweet disguise.

In this garden of tangled thorns,
each bloom hides a story, lush yet stark,
to read the petals is to tread softly,
for beauty and sorrow are shades in the dark.

Saturday, March 28, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: mirror
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Brooke Renwick 29 May 2026

Do you know that gossip is only someones opinion and not truth? Opinion is cheap.

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Brooke Renwick 29 May 2026

I can imagine your endurance.

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Rose Stern 29 May 2026

This is beautifully heartbreaking.

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