Saturday, March 28, 2009

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She kicked your boots from under the bed
Took back all the words that she had said
I love you's and I miss you's
She must not have had a clue
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Maggie lll
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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

a flowing piece, doesnt seem like segments of compilation. haunts with the fading time & memories' with the delicate, she woven in the background. title n the first stanza is very into the plot of poem straight away! & esp. loved the s5 lithely dancing in your words, 12 inch stretches of ghosts in the past obsidian turns with needle point memories haunting the atmosphere like shadow dancer

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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

a flowing piece, doesnt seem like segments of compilation. haunts with the fading time & memories' with the delicate, she woven in the background. title n the first stanza is very into the plot of poem straight away! & esp. loved the s5 lithely dancing in your words, 12 inch stretches of ghosts in the past obsidian turns with needle point memories haunting the atmosphere like shadow dancer

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