Paper Boat Poem by Miika Kaltiainen

Paper Boat

Rating: 4.0


In this stream of life, only thin layer to float.
Mercy of the stormy seas, without the coat.

Future uncertainty, surrounded by the doubt.
Beautiful memories to my skin she wrote.

Left voyage to my heart, I'm paper boat.

Saturday, January 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream girl,dreaming,dreams,love,love and dreams,love and life,missing,missing you,sad,dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lantz Pierre 14 January 2017

This has a beautiful stillness of Oriental lyricism. A calm radiant heart surrounded by, supported by, in harmony with the world around it. I suspect some of this effect is produced a less than fluent translation from Finnish(?) , but it matters not. I fear some the freshness and innocence might be lost in a better translation. I like it very much.

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