Oscar Aceves

Rookie (Feb-19-92 / Los Angeles)

Paradise - Poem by Oscar Aceves

My mind is like a hole,
Empty,
But that was until I met you,
You filled that hole,
That hole is filled with you,
Filled with thought about you,
About tour smile, Your face,
I wanna take you to this place,
This place I call my heaven,
Where we'll never have to say goodbye,
For I'll always see you here,
To stare at you and look into your eyes,
Cuz as soon as we say goodbye,
I'm already missing you,
And that's what I wanna do,
I wanna take you to my heaven,
My home, My island,
My Paradise,
This place that is nice,
A place where you'll be happy,
And You'll never cry,
Where my feelings for you never die,
A place where the night sky,
Is filled with the Shiny Stars,
And a Bright Moon,
A place like this,
Is a place that is hard to find,
So until then,
You will always stay in my heart,
And on my mind.

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  • Evaughn Gray (12/2/2007 2:54:00 PM)

    wow i like that..i had the image of paradise in my mind..great poem, i give it a 10! ..~hazel (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011


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