Pradeep Dhavakumar

Rookie (August 27th,1979 / India)

Paradise - Poem by Pradeep Dhavakumar

Everest carved to hollow cone
Floored with finest beach sand
Stars grouped to a sparkling moon
And moon made to a table lamp

Wind gently waking baby rocks
Flowers like lovers hugging tight
Bamboos and brooks tuning chords
Peacocks rehearsing wedding dance

Clothed with rainbow, in peace I lay
Satiated by breeze of infinite joy
Infused with rivers of rejuvenating hope
Blessed with rays of vitalizing love

To Paradise! I go, whenever I lay
On father's shoulder, mother’s lap

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  • (7/28/2006 11:29:00 PM)


    A very nice approach to the poem makes it charming. I like the transformations you show in this work: this to that and that to this. Specially this line read so sweet: Stars grouped to a sparkling moon...The last line made it all complete.

    Nibedita Deb.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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