Mary Lolly Florence Occenola

Rookie - 25 Points (09/20/1985 / Philippines)

Paralysis - Poem by Mary Lolly Florence Occenola

Paralysis

Her vulnerability moreso confirms that the wall has been totally torn down.

A wall put up since time immemorial
with a purpose intended for the one

He adamantly took the bricks one by one to reveal the beauty on the other side

She unknowingly succumbs to a sweet oblivion

Too late to realize that the same bricks were used to put up his own wall

Fated to fall, but Fear was bigger


Copyright 2015
MLFDO

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Paralysis by Mary Lolly Florence Occenola

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/11/2015 7:23:00 PM)


    Most impressive work, young lady with the potpourri of first names... LoL! Your choice to employ a most intriguing variable stanzaic structure mixing couplets with two lone-lines works well....Very polished work, indeed... ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2015



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