Monday, May 23, 2005

Passing Time Comments

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And what about tomorrow,
for it's never far away.
Will it fulfil the hopes and dreams,
thay we have made today?
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Norman E Dale
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Raynette Eitel 23 May 2005

This is nicely crafted, Norman. This is a common theme for all of us poets, but you have taken it to a good place. Raynette

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Norman E Dale

Norman E Dale

Littleborough Lancs.U.K.
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