Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know what I want when I look at you
Tough boy in your blue jeans stance bald and fifty
Opposites play off inside the soft parts of my brain
To make sense of you is to solve a rubrics cube 
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Mary young
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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2012

Impressive and well penned! I like it very much Mary! Your heart has spoken in such an elegant and direct way that makes this short write powerful! Definitely, you have what it takes to make it in the Poetry World: Talent and Feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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