Evi Koroni

Freshman - 610 Points (Greece)

Peace - Poem by Evi Koroni

Racism, islamophobia, homophobia, war, blackphobia
Why so fear in the air?
Why so fear in their lives?
Why we are not living in a cool jeweled moon?
Joke; but why not?

Moment of inner freedom
when the mind is opened.
Shake dreams from your brain
you will find your peace
of your own paradise

Written November,29 2017

Topic(s) of this poem: black african american, earth, fear, free mind, homophobia, peaceful, racism, racist, war, war and peace

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Comments about Peace by Evi Koroni

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/27/2017 9:42:00 PM)

    Congrats, you have touched a very sensitive topic in this great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (12/27/2017 5:53:00 PM)

    It is so difficult to comprehend all the racism, war and other serious issues that live with us.
    We need more messages of Peace like yours in hope of freedom for all.
    Thank You
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  • (12/27/2017 2:09:00 PM)

    All though this written poem is really told in the fewest words possible it says a lot. I found it an interesting piece. The poet's thoughts has cleverly been put on paper. Well done. Congratulations...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (12/27/2017 1:21:00 PM)

    Strong and powerful thrive upon our psyche of fear. They do everything to enhance it. A peaceful mind is free from fear. Thanks for sharing the wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/27/2017 1:13:00 PM)

    Moment of inner freedom! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Binayakumar Mohanty (12/27/2017 6:23:00 AM)

    Not a matter of fifty words but the poem is a challenge for hundreds of races and millions of racists. It is never any body's business.The poem is simply viiolent .I loved it (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/27/2017 6:09:00 AM)

    Nice expression.
    'Moment of inner freedom
    when the mind is opened.'..is so nice. Congrats.
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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (12/27/2017 5:35:00 AM)

    A great deal of courage and compassion is needed within to be in, to dwell in peace.
    Its a divine dream indeed.
    Thanks Evi for the noble thought shared.
    Congratulations for being picked POD.
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  • Tom Allport (12/27/2017 3:34:00 AM)

    beautifully expressed Evi, I totally agree WHY? ..................well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/27/2017 2:56:00 AM)

    It requires a lot of conviction and planning to be able to contemplate
    peace within us and in the world. Thank you, Evi Koroni. Congrats for poem of the day.
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  • (12/27/2017 1:02:00 AM)

    The pure and placid expression of a soul for peace comes when it dwells in such profound thoughts as this........
    Evi.........great thought with great composition.......deserves PO.D...........thanks for sharing
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (12/27/2017 12:53:00 AM)

    Evi, such an inspiring write that touches the heart of peace-loving people... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Hassan Hayati (12/27/2017 12:33:00 AM)

    Very nice topic, this is what I ever think of, congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2017 7:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful! Beautiful! Congrats poetess. you are young and powerful. You should published a poetry book in English.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/12/2017 3:06:00 PM)

    Racism, islamophobia, homophobia, war, black-phobia
    Why so fear in the air?
    yes shake away everything from ur brain and u will find peace.. very nice idea dear poetess. tony
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  • (12/4/2017 4:44:00 PM)

    Bravo Evi, your words are also so wonderful.....great: -) (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2017 4:12:00 PM)

    Really great... nice pen

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  • Evi Koroni (12/3/2017 6:16:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for all of those incretable comments.

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  • Chinedu Dike (12/2/2017 6:44:00 PM)

    An insightful piece on the need for universal brotherhood of man, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with conviction. Thanks for sharing Evi. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/2/2017 5:22:00 AM)

    Shake dreams from your brain
    you will find your peace
    of your own paradise- - a great thinking free from the limitations of creed, colour phobias..... thank yu dear poetess. tony
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 30, 2017

Poem Edited: Monday, January 15, 2018

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