Monday, December 5, 2005

Pencil And Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pressure to do it right….
The pencil shivers in my moist palm….
The bare paper laughs at me….
I strive to do it right….
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Coco Albin
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You really capture the creative passion. I enjoyed this. Thanks, L&T

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Jacks Packs 04 September 2006

HEY NAHLA! ! ! OMG, AWESOMMMMEEE POEM! ! : D: D: D

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Cj Heck 05 December 2005

Nice work - I especially like the line: 'I scribble them down as if I have moments to live'. I wish I had thought of that (smiling) . Warmest regards, CJ

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Coco Albin

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