People At Sea Poem by alicia page

People At Sea

Rating: 3.0


There are people at sea
Feeling the gentle breeze
Where the sun shines down
And they are tightly bound

They row all day
and they sleep all night
on sunday they pray
And thats when they are spotted
For that they are out of sight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darius Fields 09 May 2011

I love the idea you use. But I believe you could have written so much more. Use comparisons of the sea to peoples feels. I like this poem. Good job! !

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