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Rookie - 334 Points (03/13/96 / Georgia)

People At Sea - Poem by alicia page

There are people at sea
Feeling the gentle breeze
Where the sun shines down
And they are tightly bound

They row all day
and they sleep all night
on sunday they pray
And thats when they are spotted
For that they are out of sight

Comments about People At Sea by alicia page

  • Darius Fields (5/9/2011 9:53:00 AM)

    I love the idea you use. But I believe you could have written so much more. Use comparisons of the sea to peoples feels. I like this poem. Good job! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2011

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