Will there ever be an escape from this hell
Will there ever be an escape from this emptiness of a shell inside of me
Will there ever be somebody to come and rescue me from this misery
Will there ever be someone to see that I'm suffering
Will there ever be someone to rescue me from what seems like a heartbreaking reality
Will there every be someone to hear my plea
Will there ever be someone to see that I am breaking
Will there every be someone to see that this world is just a fantasy
So tell me this will someone ever open their eyes and realize that there is never a way to break all these terrible ties as well a this suffering inside of me
Suffering is inspiration for a poet. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks
They say that ' a problem shared is a problem halved '......this poem is from the soul.... Keep on writing!
Alicia, please re-read and edit this poem. There is no issue with the repetition at the start of each line. This is an established and recognised poetic form of embellishment. However, the typo's have used everY, twice...... I might consider breaking the last two lines into three.... Danny.
I think this writing is great extremely dark and filled with sadness, your emotions spread fluently and are all there. Life is only as beautiful as you want to make it, I can sense a strong feeling of emptiness in the chasm of your heart but you will never be alone find the beauty in your own reality and maybe then you will release that suffering inside.
You're fatigued from prolonged suffering, young woman. But you should take a look around and decide to enjoy the scenery as this desert you're in is not boundless and cannot hold you captive forever.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is only temporary. That's all I can really say. This poem comes from deeply endowed emotion. Until you decide that it is not somebody who will rescue you; That it is in fact you. Yourself. You will never find escape. A beautifully true and sincere write. I hope you see the end of the tunnel Alicia. And the light it gives way to