Perfect Child Comments

This poem describes so many people that I know. I think that it is a very inspired work and more poems like this need to be written

And there you’ll see a wounded soul Filled with lies and sin. Pressure, hate, anxiety The feelings full of sorrow Depression, longing, suffering She hides the identity of herself- - you are very sincere in writing about your own true identity. you are a bold person. you face yourself- break the masks and show who you are..or else oneday it will break you. a fine theme you are portraying. thank you very much.