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Ph: Life: Hidden Treasures Comments

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I would like to be open to love one like you,
With no judgment or cause (like morality's laws) ,
A soft posture brings echoes of love from the past,
Some apparel suggests I, perhaps, should leave fast.
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Bri Edwards 17 August 2019

" In a diamond's, no blood! " ..i've struggled some before reading this. This i really don't 'get'. maybe lose the comma? ? check line 19 for missing word? " you've known" OR " you know" , perhaps? this poem i don't grok! ! ! but i've seen worse. hee-hee " grok /ɡräk/ verb informal•US understand (something) intuitively or by empathy." bri :)

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