Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Phenomenal Man (Ok Maya!) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Younger Men wonder where my secret lies
I’m not hirsute or built on a weight lifting device
But when I start to tell them
They assume I’m out to dupe ‘em
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David Taylor
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Veela Ammons 11 May 2010

That was beautiful. Honestly, I wasn't expecting to like it. I'll have to see if I can find more things you've written. Blessings, Veela

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Anna Russell 31 March 2007

David, I love this and I love you! Hugs Anna xxx

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Marci Made 28 March 2007

MY GOSH, he's got it.....Just Perfect David, spot on target, in a man, it's all about their 'heart' and well maybe the look of sincerity in the eyes, for through those eyes you can often see if there's a heart and soul within. It's not the extras that get us, it's the 'real' of what's there. Don't care what others think, I still believe our words represent who we are within. Grand write......love it. marcixo

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