Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Phoenix Comments

Rating: 4.5

We have made an unspoken promise,
taken a vow of silence
on this subject that burns us both.
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Amy Serhienko
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

This reminds me of my poem, 'Ashes.' The creativity is what stands out. But it is the great ending that seals it. I gave it my usual top score of 9. GW62

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