Monday, November 21, 2016

Pirate! Comments

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The planks laid
By sure and steady hands
Without doubt the anchor drops to land
Faired and winded and weathered through
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Kellie Milligan
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Seamus O Brian 21 November 2016

A jaunty adventure, for sure. Very engaging rhythm here, the pace of the poem matches its story, and pulls us into the tale. The true meaning materializes toward the end, which is a very nice touch. Well done, good poet. Bravo! :)

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