Sunday, May 13, 2007

Playing A Prominent Role Comments

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when the man who opens your eyes takes your name
there is no beating the weather
the crowd sings, diseased rings
tell us all a story we'd rather not hear
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Tanec Rayl
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Goldy Locks 25 May 2007

i prefer the title: `Playing a more prominent role'.. because this entails a comparison, am i right, an alluding emphasis? loftier than some of your others. Just as idealistic. magnifies the grappling projection: hope is a spiritual clap. care, sjg

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