Please Poem by Kirsten Hack

Please



Im all alone
Sitting on my own
No one around me
No one can see me
How can I be
The odd one out
In side me I just want to scream and shout
Let everyone know im here
So I shed no more tears
Please just once
Can someone notice me
Why cant you people just see
Being alone makes me cry
And I just want to die
Oh please
Just once
Please
Just notice me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leo Lopes 23 July 2006

Hey it's Leo..... thankyou 4 writing to me honey, you know you were the 1st person to send the lion a comment? ... Iv'e been reading some of your poems ay..... so far im only up to 'Oh why' but after this ima read more, i thought that poem 'End of it all' was mad i can't believe you're so good at poems... and also i can't believe you're going so much drama at your age..... iv'e noticed you baybe, ooh yeah b4 i forget, i thought 'i do' was so cute. i can't really write poems...... some of these are just lyrics iv'e written put into poem form...............but don't tell anybody lol. i put a new one on today but i don't know when it'll be published yet? ? ? Anyway keep writing poems okay.........and ima keep reading em wb weneva ciao LL

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Kirsten Hack

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Ipswich Australia
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