Please? Poem by Ashleigh Stephenson

Please?



Will everyone shut up? !
Quit telling me what to do.
I can take care of myself you know.
Don’t tell me when to do this.
Don’t tell me when to do that
Quit trying to run my life.
I can make my own decisions.
Stop nagging me.
Stop asking me.
I won’t do what you say.
I’ll do what I want when I want to.
So just quit talking.
OK? !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 04 June 2006

Ashleigh, this is a good poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It's great to see young writers who are not bogged down in sing-song patterns of rhyme and rhythm. And I your sentiments come across loud and clear. Congratulations. Regards, Alison

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