Please Poem by Brittany Gorski

Please

Rating: 5.0


My heart is breaking
Thoughts of losing you
tears me to pieces
I love you so much
And I offered you my heart
My mind
And my soul
You took them
Now you threaten to leave
To throw them away
My eyes fill with tears
I fall to my knees
Begging you to stay
Please don't leave me
All alone and afraid
I need you in my life
To hold me close
And love me
Every day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 05 February 2009

Loved the flow of this piece Brittany, your heart was felt on each line...lovely job Keep expressing Best wishes Jon

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success