Please, God Dont Take My Mommy Poem by angeline snowboy

Please, God Dont Take My Mommy

Rating: 5.0


she sees her mommy get beaten up, she sees his eyes full with angry
she doesnt do nothing but watch her suffer, as he left the house taking suite cases with him
asks if her mommy is ok, mommy doesnt do anything but lay there suffering from the pain
she goes up to her room, tears strolling down her face, she kneed down and prayd to god
that her mommy will be ok, she hears a loud thumb, shes walking towards her mommy
mommy tells her to call 911, as the police came crashing through the door
she sits by mommys side, seeing the nurses and doctors trying to heal the pain
she sat there doing nothing but cry, she asks her mommy
'mommy are you gonna be ok? is daddy going on a trip without us? when is he coming back'
she reply 'dont worry honey ill be fine and yeah daddy is going on a trip, its gonna take him awhile to come back ok? '
she reply as her tears came shooting like bullets from mommys shirt 'ok but you dont look ok mommy'
they went to the hospital strolld her into room 3
she watchs her mommy sleep, sits there waiting for her to wake up
she knee down by her side gently holds her hand, she said
'god we're here in the hospital room 3, i askd my mommy if shes ok but she replyd yes
if she is why are we siting here in the hospital? , shes still suffering from the pain, god is she gonna be ok?
please god reply me im only 6, i lost my daddy hes going on a trip mommy said its gonna take him awhile to come back
and i dont want to lose my mommy, please god dont take my mommy right now,
cause shes the only one i need, my family members are in the waiting room, they dont want me to go home with them
thats why i need my one and only mommy, god please im only 6'
than she sees her mommy taking her last breathes, her last words were
'honey im always gonna be here, dont worry i love you'
she broke down into tears, she crys at her grave now she realizes that mommy aint suffering anymore! /3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Hatila ;) 28 December 2008

very sad, yeah they always say that they gonna be ok but we think they are not, but in reality they are in place that we all wish to be, they are relaxed now coz they are in paradise.... you made me to shed tears, very touching.....10 Hataw

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