Monday, May 5, 2008

Pleasure Can Be Pain Comments

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Pleasure can be pain
Pleasure can be a game
Pleasure can everything
But when you find it
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teiaire patrick
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Muriel Emerson 06 May 2008

nice poem it was interesting

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 May 2008

well, not bad at all for a starter, you can improve on your vocabulary and grammar, then you' ll be ok. you have to do more reading teiaire. keep writing.

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