Saturday, July 25, 2015

Poem#4 Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sidelines fading away
The heartless buffoon pleads
Shouting screaming kicking
Begs I'm all that he needs
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Sara Sixteen
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Chinedu Dike 02 August 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry depicting lost of fascination and distress in the bliss of love. Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly, it's also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave with or without warning. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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