Pressing Cane Poem by Ross Cohen

Pressing Cane

Rating: 2.5


After the Thanksgiving
Meal, we pressed the cane.

The stripped stalks were cut;
You and I were to tease syrup

Out of the flaxy yield.
So we bundled the cane, held

It below a rolling stone,
And quashed the crop. Sweet water flowed

Into a bucket set
Beneath the press, collect

-ed, and was brought to a boil
In a fat, rust-stoked kettle

Drum.
That night, spread out
And sore, I watched you enter,
unannounced,

Rest your head on the bed’s far side,
And sigh

As you pressed your weight
Against my frame.

I’ve known the stone
cane’s cursed and blessed,
Its familiar weight,
once scorned, now missed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily Putian 23 October 2009

The fifth and sixth stanzas or unnecessary and superfluous, the implied comparison of the sweet pressed cane and the the bed-mates is interesting.

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Ross Cohen

Ross Cohen

Born in New York, reared in Pennsylvania.
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