Saturday, October 11, 2008

Pretentious Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

A friend never leaves any other friend
but what will happened if betrayal starts
to circle within your friendship?
Never anticipated that one's friend can do that
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Kish Jane
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Ency Bearis 11 October 2008

this is a nice poem..and nice concept with deliverance.. just a little bit improvement in meter... Ency Bearis

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