Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Pretty Crimson Wires Comments

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My heart is in my mouth,
Frightened by these dreams.
Every night my knife it seems to be
Prying deep into my seams
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Daniel Richards
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Stephanie Breana 30 June 2010

Such a powerful poem. Very well written. I hope your dreams do not come back and as the comment below me says you aren't alone and do have people that love you. Still love the poem.

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Richard Adcock 25 July 2007

Dan, as your Father I find this poem very very upsetting and a strong and powerfull insight into your troubled mind. I pray that my love for you is as strong as your words and along with your devoted and loving girlfriend Layla we can help you find peace of mind and inner calm Dad

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