Ravinder Kumar Soni

Gold Star - 30,075 Points (05/04/1944 / Delhi)

Promise - Poem by Ravinder Kumar Soni

When I arrive at your gates it will be
The arrival of awaited Spring to meet.
I have noticed, of late you haven't been
Cheerful and active, your garden dull and dry;
But, I shall redo your life for you,
And Spring will revive your garden too
Filling it up with coloured and scented blooms;
We shall then gleefully make you move and act,
Be lively, smile and long for more.

Your sunlight, the wind, and rain I am,
You are my life, my love, and cosy shade;
Because of us and for us all things exist,
Making us worthy of life we lead
All happy, spry and eventful.

Topic(s) of this poem: thought


Comments about Promise by Ravinder Kumar Soni

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/29/2019 3:40:00 AM)

    Your sunlight, the wind, and rain I am,
    You are my life, my love, and cosy shade....lovely poetic expression! Loved reading this lovely poem...10
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  • Riza Braholli (6/30/2018 11:29:00 AM)

    Yes a poem Wanderful... Thank you for with me you bring peace to me... Riza (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (6/2/2018 11:22:00 PM)

    Pleasant train of thoughts, well articulated and elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/19/2018 11:49:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem dear brother. As you have not been well I'm certain that this poem may help you feel better. It has spring in its step and therefore renewal. A very cheerful write. (Report)Reply

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  • Rini Shibu (3/8/2018 5:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem welcoming spring which revives the life..10 (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/30/2017 5:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem welcoming the arrival of spring, where promises will be met. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Dawn Novus (9/25/2017 12:51:00 AM)

    The still moment before next breath. Eloquent and resonate. (Report)Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur (8/27/2016 1:04:00 AM)

    Because of us and for us all things exist, ...
    Interesting anticipation..Well written..keep up.
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    (8/27/2016 2:14:00 AM)

    Hum hain to sab kuchh hai hum nahin to kuchh bhi nahin. I had visited Jorhat many times during 1984-88, I was then posted at Tinsukia of which I have many fond memories and that is where I wished to settle down relishing the greenery of the tea-gardens, the clean sweet air and the company of lovely people; a far cry from polluted, arid and heartless Delhi.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/27/2016 12:16:00 AM)

    Having promise to meet the arrival of spring is definitely interesting. Smile and sunlight delight such arrival. Fantastic sharing is done really...10 (Report)Reply

    (8/27/2016 2:21:00 AM)

    Thanx for appreciating this little effort of mine. Believe me I am not a poet, I merely scribble to while away time and stay clear of ugly thoughts and happenings.

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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (8/26/2016 11:56:00 PM)

    Keep your promise. A beautiful poem as a wafting breeze. (10) (Report)Reply

    (8/27/2016 2:42:00 AM)

    Just learnt you have done research in the field of Astrology. How would you read the impact of vakri Guru's mahadasa exalted in the 8th house along with Rahu, and aspected by Sani? The answer has evaded me even though I have written and got published two books on Hindu Astrology.

    (8/27/2016 2:26:00 AM)

    I read some of your poems; your expression is effective and sound. I am glad you have liked my little effort.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 1, 2018


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