Promise The Girl Poem by Ghost 614

Promise The Girl

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My words have reached an impasse with me
The things I promise I guarantee
But you need to think long and hard since it's all we do
Because I'm here and I'm human too
I'll react to your love
Your ideas
And your thoughts
We'll be there for each other
Like a gun with no shots
One day we could be together
One day we could not, that's true
But until then don't shut me out
Don't shut down, because I love you
You ask what that means
And I give you more words
But I feel the phrase the is cut into thirds
My jealousy is extinct, except for my dreams
Until the light returns and through my blinds it streams
I know you've been hurt
And I know sometimes it's hard
We've started so well
And gotten so far
So forgive me if I say too much
Or if I fight for what feels right

To be continued...

Friday, June 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

But you need to think long and hard since it's all we do Because I'm here and I'm human too I'll react to your love Your ideas.......love is always a mystery....... you are really a lucky person if u can find some one who is really lovable and keep to his or her words... experiences in life are so different...... have a relationship to God... and then try to relate or get into a relationship. when both are united with God... then it may lead both into a world of love. thank you for this poem. tony

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