Pronounciation Lessons Poem by Liza Sud

Pronounciation Lessons

Not choosed, but chose, and not mens, but men.
You raise up people to the seventh heaven,
Today I dreamed of tender clarinet,
But you sang as a flute and thus excelled him.

There is no plural letter at the end,
just taken by the sky, and not elected,
And as before, you're in the royal wreath,
And our union is exonerated.

Why are there four stanzas in a verse?
Rise - speed up - ecstasy - and relaxation,
And we have reached the third stage on our road,
And we will pass again, without question.

Nothing will prevent us from being jointly,
In separate verse - eternity is shininig,
Although in March for us the snow is falling,
But between us the Sun is undivided!

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Не choosed, а chose, и не mens, а men.
Ты повышаешь до седьмого неба,
сегодня снился ласковый кларнет,
но ты его, как флейта, перепела.

Нет множественной буквы на конце,
не избранный, а просто небом забран,
и ты, как прежде, в царственном венце,
и наш союз по-прежнему оправдан.

Зачем в стихах четыре есть строфы?
Подъем - разгон - экстаз - и разрешенье,
и мы дошли до третьего в пути,
и вновь пройдем, вне всякого сомненья.

Ничто не помешает вместе быть,
в отдельности стихов - сияет вечность,
хоть хлопьями к нам в марте снег валит,
но между нами - Солнца безраздельность!

Tuesday, March 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lesson,lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 29 March 2017

I love this poem, Liza. It speaks to me in an intuitive level, as in direct soul to soul communication. How marvelous! ! Each stanza has a passage that I take into my mind to meditate on: In the first stanza my favorite lines in this poem: Today I dreamed of a tender clarinet. / But you sang as a flute and surpassed him. WOW. Second stanza: ... You're in the royal wreath, / and our union is exonerated. Oh, blessed reconciliation! Third stanza: We have reached the third stage of our road. Is that ecstasy? ? Ecstasy is the third term in the previous line. Fourth stanza: Eternity is shining. ETERNITY BY ITS NATURE SHINES BUT WE (THE WE OF THE POEM) are finally aware of it. Your comment says this poem contains LESSONS OF LIFE. Yes, I know it does, and I want to articulate your poem's meaning further. It summons me like a message sent to my soul, requesting from me an equally committed response. I must find the words and the resolution.

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