Thursday, July 27, 2006

Proud To Be A Man Comments

Rating: 4.5

So many things are said against us...
even our very own. Put us down
but that wont let me loose my focus
not even put a frown under my crown...
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Orlando Edwin
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Satori Andaemonel 07 September 2009

What's wrong with being a dog? Loyal, faithful, playful? ... At my beck and call? Lol! Great poem tho, loving the third stanza.

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