Monday, April 27, 2009

Pulses Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tingling kiss lingers upon the crimson lips;
Parted in an exaggerated expression of awe and desire.
I leave my saddened sorrow for the hope of a new morrow;
A new morrow which lingers upon my crimson lips.
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Brooklyn Joy
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Shagun Khera 28 April 2009

Do u have an idea..what u have written.. this is called..a masterpiece...its alive and larger than life.. m ur fan..

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

a silent masterpiece..brilliant verses! 10

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