Questions Poem by Martin Dyke

Questions

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He who tortures
He who eats
He who desires.

In a world you fear
In a world of pain
In a world of fires.

A creature black
A creature red
A creature greater than Him.

Because you are evil
Because you're complacent
Because you sin.

Soon.

Monday, May 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ross Shand 06 May 2014

There aren't any metaphors, really. It is a traditional view of Satan- a cliché, if you want. But there are some novel touches.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

Interesting. Rather clichéd, I'm sorry to share. You might want to think of more original images and metaphors.....

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