Thursday, January 2, 2003

"The Quite Fire&Quot; Comments

Rating: 3.3

Quite is the fire, quite is the dreams,
quite is the passions, the laughter and the tears,
Quite is the fire that sooths the moment.
Quite is the fire it's like a snow bird in flight,
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Margot Lindsey
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Rosemary Brown 01 November 2006

I think you must mean 'quiet' not 'quite'. The poem is good, but the grammatical errors are distracting. Quiet ARE the dreams...

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Margot Lindsey

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