R.I.P Little Bow-Peep Comments

Well, honestly? My poems all have deeper meanings. Many of them actually are completely metaphors. This one is actually about how corrupt the world is today. I myself have lost my childhood to this world. Its a little rebellious poem. I love descriptive poems. Many of them will always form a picture in your mind about what's happening. So my answer would have to be more about innocene being stolen. You can really have a normal childhood, but then again it depends what you definition of 'normal' and thank you very much. I appreciate the comment.

Yikes, some very vivid imagery, but still some great ideas and insight. I don't think I have to comment on what I think this poem is about, but I applaud the skill with which you got your point across - I can see I do not have to give advice about grammar or vocabulary. Very well done, albeit quite dark: / Is this about child abduction, or is it more a greater metaphor of innocence in all its forms being taken advantage of?