Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Racism Comments

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Racism, Racism, Racism
You give a human sorrow and hate
Racism, Racism, Racism
Look at what you've done and look at their state
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Carniz Fatema
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nashalie rosado 31 May 2020

i liked your poem carniz

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Tommy M. 06 May 2014

I love your poem Carniz, I really do! I just wanted to point out an error on your last sentence and please believe me when I say I do not want to be the grammar police but merely trying to help. The last sentence is as follows...Your not wanted so go die with fear. Replace your with you're as in you are! ; -)

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