Friday, August 22, 2008

Rags And Riches Comments

Rating: 2.8

Deep blue, almost black,
sadness.
Being,
my ache of existence.
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Satish Verma
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Goldy Locks 22 August 2008

I gave it a 10, because i know your writing....but actually, Satish, i think you can do more with this, and i would love to see its expansion. tight, crisp. focused - always. best care, sjg

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