Thursday, January 29, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rain batters on my window pane
collects in puddles deep
and like the ticking of a clock
it lulls me back to sleep
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Evelyn Macdonald
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Linda Gatiens 28 January 2018

Every time it rains now I will think of this poem Evelyn! True about the rainbows!

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Jim Norausky 30 January 2009

Your words flow so smoothly here. Very enjoyable poem. Jim

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Ency Bearis 29 January 2009

great imagery write..wonderful poem...10

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Evelyn Macdonald

Evelyn Macdonald

Leven, Fifeshire, Scotland
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