Saturday, April 11, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.0

A glance out the window,
Into the darkened clouds,
that sit outside, above the sky.
How I wish to be outside,
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Alyy Fabrizio
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Pink Poozle 11 April 2009

I gave your poem a 6, because it did stand out, but the feature didn't really occur to me.....still, very good writer, you are, you could take your poetry much further, you know. Congratulations!

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Tigerkit fabrizio 11 April 2009

[: I reallyy lovee thiss poem! ! !

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